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Wednesday, 4 March 2020

Iqbal

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Iqbal lost his human rights when he died by in assassination in the age of 12. Iqbal was born a slave and became a symbol of abusive child labour in the developing world. Iqbal was targeted or was assassinated by someone we don’t know. Iqbal was assassinated and lost his human rights.

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Iqbal loses his human right  when he was 12 years old he died by in assassination, his not going to school and working hard making carpet .Iqbal was born a slave and became a symbol of abusive child labour in the developing world.  Iqbal was targeted or was assassinated by someone we don’t know and killed Iqbal.Iqbal was assassinated and lost his human rights.

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