My holiday in Queenstown on 28th of December for 2 nights was great.
I am with my family and friends we went camping for a holiday.
First we went to lake Pukaki. This is where we camped. When we got there, my mum and my friend cooked some food. It was very nice.
We put up our tent was blue and it was big.
Next we went fishing in the lake .the lake looked green with fish and seaweed I didn’t catch any salmon.
the next day we went to queenstown. In queenstown we went on the luge it was
cool we went fast.we sat i a cart i could not go around the corner.
It was very cool my holiday at my life
Reflection:
I think that I created an interesting piece of writing because…it was very good at my life
For next time I could spend more time on make it have better words
In my writing, I would like to improve my full stops and capital letters
WHAT
WHEN
WHERE
WHY
WHERE
WHY
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