Creative Writing: Mirror, Mirror

So In English I been working on this mirror, mirror writing and i am making a short dialogue about me and mirror. It was based of the mirror would say to me when i woke up in the morning.   

Me: Mirror mirror on the wall could you please describe how I look like today.
Mirror:You look good today.
Me: Thank you! I wish I have time later to talk to you mirror.
Mirror: Yes me too! But i can get out of this wall.
Me: okay mirror I have a great day.
Mirror: You too! and don't get messy on your face or your body.




   

Hottest place and Coldest place in the word Comparison

Hottest place and coldest place in the word Comparison

Hottest place 

Coldest place 

There are so many hot places and cold places on earth.  Death

Valley is the hottest place on earth and the coldest place is

Oymyakon and it is very cold there. 

The hottest place on earth is Death Valley in California, USA .

It is famous as the hottest place on the earth and it is the driest

place in North America. It is too hot there to live but some animals

are in there. The record for this Death Valley is 134°F (57°F)was

recorded at Furnace Creek on July 10, 1913. 

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The coldest place on earth is in Russia in Oymyakon it is known as

a small town of 500 people located in the republic of  Sakha. There

are 500 humans live there in the town and some animals

(deer,white rabbits and a bear). live in the oymyakon .The

temperature there average -58°F During winter mounts.

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The hottest place is Death Valley in California. The temperatures

are 134°F (57°C. However In the coldest place is in Russia in

Oymyakon the temperatures are -58°F During winter months.

The Hunter swoop:

The cloud is covering the Blue sky and above the mountain there is a green tree.

It is a orange with a sun and a tree with dark forest.

It is is brown wood port floating in the water.

it is a girl setting down on the wood port and looking into the water.

Character: A frog( male 14 year old)

Like: He like to watch water moving, listening to the nature, fishing, hangout with his friends ,sleeping, Chilling

Dislike : He don't like to being  alone, someone is bullying him and something that someone steeling on his staff.

Characteristic: play( playing on the water with his friends)Fishing(Fishing for his launch) chilling( Chill  for the time and listening for the nature       

Self Directed learners

My learning goal for this week is to Reflect on my learning by asking:- How do I know what I've learned?-
- Can I explain what I've learnt to someone else
- can I apply what I've learned when creating my work.
I need to work on this because i don't know what to do sometimes and sometimes I know what to do.

Child Soldier

Creative Writing Matrix - Free Writing

A boy walking alone

One day there is a boy his name is Jan he is setting down ,drawing a art work and the bell ring he have to walk to the class to ready to learn. Meanwhile they are learning arts and he know how to draw he is very good at drawing. They are drawing a dragon and the teacher said to start Jan start drawing a dragon. after he draw a dragon he show it to the teacher and said well done Jan you good at this staff. after the period five he walk to the gate of the school and start walk to the burger king and he order on e cheese burger, a fries and one coke for his dinner he look at the time the time is 6:00 pm of the afternoon and he eat the burger first, second he eat the fries and drink coke. Meanwhile he is staring walk to his house he have to walk 2 mile to get home he starting walking he put the one earphone to his ear he lessen to music he walking to the side of the road and walking alone the meddle of the 2 miles and he look at the sky and he realise he was walking with his friends but he don't have a friends except for one person that he like the most of the time and hanging out with his name is Adam. Jan keep walking home and there is on e more miles to walk Jan cry because he is alone walk on the road and he forget about that then he just chill tell get home. The end 

The Hunter Swoop

A grey sky chilling in the high with a bird flying in the sky. Big mountain with a grey sky the grass or tree are covering the big ,mountain. The drive way are scrabble going to the mountain.The drive way are going to the big mountain with a snow covering grass or tree.

The tree are old or dead forest , the place are scary and a dark place to walk.A tree that are dying and a that you can start walking in the dark forest.There are water in the bottom of the image The falling leaves and a drive way going straight with a foggy place.

The top corner is orange with light yellow and a bird flying to the sky. To the right corner are gold with Gray in the sky and chill sky in the height. Bottom of the image is a rock with a sea weeds in the rock with a water in the sea. The centre of the image are old boat or ship that are chilling in the sea and there are nothing in there.

 

Creative Writing Matrix - My remote control life

One day on my way to school, I saw a strange remote laying down in the middle of the road. It had many buttons that was similar to a T.V remote. I thought to myself, a man dropped his remote control while carrying a T.V. I laughed to myself for thinking this way. I picked up the remote, it was surprisingly heavier than my own T.V remote. Thinking I would add to my collection of my junk stuff, I decided to put it in my bag. As I was walking by I saw my friend Tim. He was a chubby short friend. We go to school almost everyday. Finally, we arrived at the school. At the hall, there was the principal who was greeting everybody with a smile. We went in to our classroom. The class started, it was the same old day that was happening over and over again. So I started to talk to Tim and showed him my new found junk to add to my collection. To remove my boredom I used the remote to mute the teacher as a joke. Suddenly the teacher went quiet. The whole class got confused of if the teacher were pulling a prank on them. However, she went silent for a long time until I pressed the unmute button on the remote towards the teacher. She started talking again. My mind was blown since I knew I now have power to control time, sound and many more. I decided to rule the world.

Future self:

That was a story of how I made my most regretful mistake.

Journey to school

Journey to school 

There are 3 children they name is Jared, Sam and Anna. They have to walk one Miles in the forest heading to the river and they have to walk one miles again to get to school . Sam is bring a inflatable ring to cross to the river that 5 feet high and they need to walk 1 miles more get to school. Sam said we should take a rest but Anna said No we can take a rest we don't have more time to get to school. But jared agree to Sam because they are tired walking They have 2 hours left to get to school Sam put the Inflatable ring an Sam said to jared lets go and get some coconut to eat, drink so we get energy and to rest for a minute. After that Anna said to jared and Sam to keep moving so will couch up to school. jared, Sam and Anna are staring walking again to go to school after 1 miles they have to cross to river but Anna don't know what to do and they communicate how there going to pass the river Sam has a idea he said what if we go around the Inflatable ring so we can cross the river, balance it and they start going around the Inflatable ring and cross the river. Sam said we did it now lets go and walk 1 more miles okay Anna and jared. After walking 1 miles they made it to school and ready to learn. The end

Smoking

Smoking 

What does smoking do to your body?

Smoking can damage you lungs, You brain can have a nicotine, cigarettes has a nicotine that can effect your lungs and brain.

Long terms effects?

There are many long term effects of cigarettes, the effects are stroke,brain damage and you eyes are yellowing of whites of your eyes.

Benefits of giving up smoking?

The benefit of  giving up of smoking are stop smoking and do something earls or exercise.

Is vaping any better? A little, cigarettes doesn't give you cancer but vape doesn't but it still gives you shorten of breath.

SDL Goal week

This week my goal is to manage my learning time so I complete all tasks because last week i have not managing my work and i have to improve that i have to manage mt learning   

Athletics

the last 6 weeks we were doing athletics and yesterday we got to do athletics i enjoy athletics because i learnt so many sports, doing i like trowing javelin and having fun in P.E. athletics is a fun sport in our team we are doing a team work, communication and working together with our sports that we work on examples javelin, sot put, sprint and other

In P.E we working blogs and goal for the day. Every day in P.E we are practice javelin, sprint ,shot put, discus,long jump and high jump for the day we do athletics day that we did yesterday.
       

Iqbal

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Iqbal lost his human rights when he died by in assassination in the age of 12. Iqbal was born a slave and became a symbol of abusive child labour in the developing world. Iqbal was targeted or was assassinated by someone we don’t know. Iqbal was assassinated and lost his human rights.

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Iqbal loses his human right  when he was 12 years old he died by in assassination, his not going to school and working hard making carpet .Iqbal was born a slave and became a symbol of abusive child labour in the developing world.  Iqbal was targeted or was assassinated by someone we don’t know and killed Iqbal.Iqbal was assassinated and lost his human rights.

Creative Writing

Figurative Language Fecap


Simile
What is simile? Simile is a comparison of two objects or things using words like or as.
Imagine a human as big as a  blue whale.
He is as cunning as a fox.
 I am as quick as a cheetah.

Alliteration
What is Alliteration?Alliteration is derived from Latin’s
“Latira” .It means “letters of the alphabet”. which a number of words 
 Soft smooth snow falls silently from the sky.
Belligerent bat -bear.
There are three trees. 

Onomatopoeia
What is onomatopoeia?Defined as a word which imitates the natural sounds of a thing.
Oops!
OMG!
Boom!

Metaphor
What is a metaphor? Metaphor is a figure of speech in which a word or phrase.
He is a human 
Sea salt
He was a lion in the fight 

Hyperbole
What is a Hyperbole?   Is statements or claims not meant to be taken literally.
This shoe is killing me.
I will love you forever.
I told a million times that this is a bad idea. 

Assonance
What is Assonance? That the noun is used for similar vowel.
Go to the rock
we went to
Johnny went here and there and everywhere.

Idiom
The idiom is a phrase  or an expression that is figurative.
Break the ice.
So far so good. 
Speak of the devil.

Personification is a giving human characteristics.
The trees don’t have hands. 
 The chair doesn't have a long leg. 
The clock doesn't have face.  

Consonance Agreement or compatibility between opinions or actions. 

 Sells sea shells by the sea shore.
The ship has sailed far off shore.

My Goal

My goal for this week is to Catch up on work i miss or fall behind on my own time because i am not catching up on my work and to make my self faster than last week